Friday, December 5, 2008

The lonely soul became More lonely

The lonely soul wanders
Alone in the walks of life
No other soul as his companion
The lonely soul wanders

Alone in the daybreak
He does his duties
In the walks of life
The lonely soul wanders

Alone in the life
He meets many other souls
Who comes to be
Unfit for the lonely soul

The lonely soul wanders
As the days pass by
The lonely soul became More lonely,
with no other souls as his companion

The lonely soul wanders
Alone in the walks of life
The lonely soul decides Not to die,
but to face Life in all its hardships
The lonely soul wanders

26 comments:

  1. The lonely soul becomes more Lonely?
    Wats wrong wid u....

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  2. Alone in the daybreak
    He does his duties
    In the walks of life
    The lonely soul wanders
    Lovely lines sir
    Regards
    Sneha

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  3. Alone in the life
    He meets many other souls
    Who comes to be
    Unfit for the lonely soul
    lovely
    Ekta,Lucknow

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  4. The lonely soul wanders
    As the days pass by
    The lonely soul became More lonely,
    with no other souls as his companion
    good one

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  5. stop putiing these sad poems avinash no 1 likes it....u r further moving deep in asylum

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  6. Alone in the walks of life
    The lonely soul decides Not to die, lovely Sir
    Ankita,Lucknow

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  7. good composition sir
    Regards

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  8. Alone in the daybreak
    He does his duties
    In the walks of life
    The lonely soul wanders

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  9. Alone in the life
    He meets many other souls
    Who comes to be
    Unfit for the lonely soul
    toching.....

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  10. so u have decided 2 reamin a emotional fool ...havent u?

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  11. The lonely soul wanders
    As the days pass by
    The lonely soul became More lonely,
    with no other souls as his companion

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  12. The lonely soul became More lonely,
    with no other souls as his companion
    nice one

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  13. The lonely soul wanders
    Alone in the walks of life
    The lonely soul decides Not to die,
    but to face Life in all its hardships
    The lonely soul wanders
    Read more...
    lovely line Avi BUT try writing something constructive, it will help u in changinng ur current frame of mind, just a Friendly request
    Take Care
    Regards

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  14. The lonely soul wanders
    As the days pass by
    The lonely soul became More lonely,
    with no other souls as his companion
    NIce Composition but a sad one

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  15. Alone in the daybreak
    He does his duties
    In the walks of life
    The lonely soul wanders

    Alone in the life
    He meets many other souls
    Who comes to be
    Unfit for the lonely soul

    nice one avinash

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  16. dont cry 4 those who dont even think of u......
    might sound harsh Avinash but truth,learn 2 accept truths

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  17. As the days pass by
    The lonely soul became More lonely,
    with no other souls as his companion

    Loneliness Personified
    Nice one sir
    Regards
    Manisha

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  18. Alone in the life
    He meets many other souls
    Who comes to be
    Unfit for the lonely soul

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  19. The lonely soul wanders
    Alone in the walks of life
    The lonely soul decides Not to die,
    but to face Life in all its hardships
    The lonely soul wanders
    Read more...

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  20. The lonely soul wanders in search of his soul mate......and he will not rest till he meets his soul mate not neccessarily his spouse tho.

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  21. Alone in the life
    He meets many other souls
    Who comes to be
    Unfit for the lonely soul
    lovely

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  22. Loneliness is Pain,
    But more its a reason
    to risk,
    to live
    to love....

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