ज़ब्त से कुछ काम ले लो, ख़ुद पे यह इल्जाम ले लो... जिसका डर था हो न जाए, उसको अपने नाम ले लो . कुछ नशा है उखडा उखडा, आओ हम से जाम ले लो ... गिर न जाएं देखना तुम , अपने हाथों थाम ले लो... नाम मेरा क्या करोगी , आशिके बदनाम ले लो "
heyyyy Guys... "thanks a lot and lot for your preceious words overe here, i read your articals and poetry on my comment space, and found that you all are very creative and innovative, so please keep it up. wish you all good luck..
Respected seema jee its always gr8 reading your poem, specially on ur blog, your creation touches heart and we can relate ourself in one way or other. Thx 4 motivating team members, its will do a lo of good to us when some one like you motivate us. thanks Regards
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heyyyy Guys...
"thanks a lot and lot for your preceious words overe here, i read your articals and poetry on my comment space, and found that you all are very creative and innovative, so please keep it up. wish you all good luck..
Regards
nice one seema jee....u always come with some thing good
very secuctive
नाम मेरा क्या करोगी ,
आशिके बदनाम ले लो "
...nice
another nice and beautiful poem
Respected seema jee its always gr8 reading your poem, specially on ur blog, your creation touches heart and we can relate ourself in one way or other. Thx 4 motivating team members, its will do a lo of good to us when some one like you motivate us.
thanks
Regards
good one
उसको अपने नाम ले लो .
कुछ नशा है उखडा उखडा,
आओ हम से जाम ले लो ...
गिर न जाएं देखना तुम ,
nice lines
agree with you snigdha
beautiful poem
Regards
Ravi Ranjan
Patna
good work
nice poem mam
regards
aah such a nice poem
गिर न जाएं देखना तुम ,
अपने हाथों थाम ले लो...
kya khoob likha hai
Regards
good poem,liked it a lot
Regards
Shyam Prasad
Lucknow
lovely poem
Regards
after long time read good peom,hats off 2 writer
Regards
thanks 2 u all and special thanks to seemajee for contributing on this blog.
Regards
कुछ नशा है उखडा उखडा,
आओ हम से जाम ले लो ...
गिर न जाएं देखना तुम ,
अपने हाथों थाम ले लो...
nice one
Bahot khub
कुछ नशा है उखडा उखडा,
आओ हम से जाम ले लो ...
gr8....
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