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Monday, November 17, 2008

"इल्जाम ले लो"


"इल्जाम ले लो"

ज़ब्त से कुछ काम ले लो,
ख़ुद पे यह इल्जाम ले लो...
जिसका डर था हो न जाए,
उसको अपने नाम ले लो .
कुछ नशा है उखडा उखडा,
आओ हम से जाम ले लो ...
गिर न जाएं देखना तुम ,
अपने हाथों थाम ले लो...
नाम मेरा क्या करोगी ,
आशिके बदनाम ले लो "

21 comments:

seema gupta November 17, 2008 at 10:45 AM  

heyyyy Guys...
"thanks a lot and lot for your preceious words overe here, i read your articals and poetry on my comment space, and found that you all are very creative and innovative, so please keep it up. wish you all good luck..

Regards

अविनाश November 17, 2008 at 4:46 PM  

nice one seema jee....u always come with some thing good

Puja November 17, 2008 at 4:54 PM  

नाम मेरा क्या करोगी ,
आशिके बदनाम ले लो "
...nice

Dr.Nishi Chauhan November 17, 2008 at 5:18 PM  

another nice and beautiful poem

Er. Snigddha Aggarwal November 17, 2008 at 5:23 PM  

Respected seema jee its always gr8 reading your poem, specially on ur blog, your creation touches heart and we can relate ourself in one way or other. Thx 4 motivating team members, its will do a lo of good to us when some one like you motivate us.
thanks
Regards

Dr. Aradhna November 17, 2008 at 5:29 PM  

उसको अपने नाम ले लो .
कुछ नशा है उखडा उखडा,
आओ हम से जाम ले लो ...
गिर न जाएं देखना तुम ,
nice lines

Anonymous,  November 17, 2008 at 5:44 PM  

beautiful poem
Regards
Ravi Ranjan
Patna

Prachi Pandey November 17, 2008 at 11:01 PM  

गिर न जाएं देखना तुम ,
अपने हाथों थाम ले लो...
kya khoob likha hai
Regards

Anonymous,  November 17, 2008 at 11:08 PM  

good poem,liked it a lot
Regards
Shyam Prasad
Lucknow

Anonymous,  November 17, 2008 at 11:18 PM  

after long time read good peom,hats off 2 writer
Regards

अविनाश November 17, 2008 at 11:22 PM  

thanks 2 u all and special thanks to seemajee for contributing on this blog.
Regards

Anonymous,  November 18, 2008 at 12:37 AM  

कुछ नशा है उखडा उखडा,
आओ हम से जाम ले लो ...
गिर न जाएं देखना तुम ,
अपने हाथों थाम ले लो...
nice one

Dr. Aradhna November 18, 2008 at 8:42 AM  

कुछ नशा है उखडा उखडा,
आओ हम से जाम ले लो ...
gr8....

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