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Friday, December 5, 2008

The lonely soul became More lonely

The lonely soul wanders
Alone in the walks of life
No other soul as his companion
The lonely soul wanders

Alone in the daybreak
He does his duties
In the walks of life
The lonely soul wanders

Alone in the life
He meets many other souls
Who comes to be
Unfit for the lonely soul

The lonely soul wanders
As the days pass by
The lonely soul became More lonely,
with no other souls as his companion

The lonely soul wanders
Alone in the walks of life
The lonely soul decides Not to die,
but to face Life in all its hardships
The lonely soul wanders

26 comments:

Dr.Nishi Chauhan December 5, 2008 at 9:24 PM  

The lonely soul becomes more Lonely?
Wats wrong wid u....

Anonymous,  December 5, 2008 at 9:25 PM  

Alone in the daybreak
He does his duties
In the walks of life
The lonely soul wanders
Lovely lines sir
Regards
Sneha

Anonymous,  December 5, 2008 at 9:25 PM  

Alone in the life
He meets many other souls
Who comes to be
Unfit for the lonely soul
lovely
Ekta,Lucknow

Dr. Pragya bajaj December 5, 2008 at 9:26 PM  

good one but lonely soul y avinash?

Anonymous,  December 5, 2008 at 9:31 PM  

The lonely soul wanders
As the days pass by
The lonely soul became More lonely,
with no other souls as his companion
good one

Er. Nidhi Mishra December 5, 2008 at 9:34 PM  

stop putiing these sad poems avinash no 1 likes it....u r further moving deep in asylum

Anonymous,  December 5, 2008 at 9:34 PM  

Alone in the walks of life
The lonely soul decides Not to die, lovely Sir
Ankita,Lucknow

Anonymous,  December 5, 2008 at 9:35 PM  

good composition sir
Regards

Anonymous,  December 5, 2008 at 9:36 PM  

Alone in the daybreak
He does his duties
In the walks of life
The lonely soul wanders

Anonymous,  December 5, 2008 at 9:36 PM  

Alone in the life
He meets many other souls
Who comes to be
Unfit for the lonely soul
toching.....

Er. Puja Kapoor December 5, 2008 at 9:49 PM  

so u have decided 2 reamin a emotional fool ...havent u?

Anonymous,  December 5, 2008 at 9:51 PM  

The lonely soul wanders
As the days pass by
The lonely soul became More lonely,
with no other souls as his companion

Anonymous,  December 5, 2008 at 10:22 PM  

The lonely soul became More lonely,
with no other souls as his companion
nice one

Dr. Neha Srivastav December 5, 2008 at 11:08 PM  

The lonely soul wanders
Alone in the walks of life
The lonely soul decides Not to die,
but to face Life in all its hardships
The lonely soul wanders
Read more...
lovely line Avi BUT try writing something constructive, it will help u in changinng ur current frame of mind, just a Friendly request
Take Care
Regards

Dr. Palki Vajpayee December 6, 2008 at 12:21 AM  

The lonely soul wanders
As the days pass by
The lonely soul became More lonely,
with no other souls as his companion
NIce Composition but a sad one

Anonymous,  December 6, 2008 at 12:22 AM  

nice one
regards

Dr. Aradhna Awasthi December 6, 2008 at 2:04 AM  

Alone in the daybreak
He does his duties
In the walks of life
The lonely soul wanders

Alone in the life
He meets many other souls
Who comes to be
Unfit for the lonely soul

nice one avinash

Er. Snigddha Aggarwal December 6, 2008 at 2:07 AM  

dont cry 4 those who dont even think of u......
might sound harsh Avinash but truth,learn 2 accept truths

Anonymous,  December 6, 2008 at 2:13 AM  

As the days pass by
The lonely soul became More lonely,
with no other souls as his companion

Loneliness Personified
Nice one sir
Regards
Manisha

Er. Paayal Sharma December 6, 2008 at 9:07 AM  

Alone in the life
He meets many other souls
Who comes to be
Unfit for the lonely soul

Anonymous,  December 6, 2008 at 4:17 PM  

The lonely soul wanders
Alone in the walks of life
The lonely soul decides Not to die,
but to face Life in all its hardships
The lonely soul wanders
Read more...

nituscorner December 6, 2008 at 11:28 PM  

The lonely soul wanders in search of his soul mate......and he will not rest till he meets his soul mate not neccessarily his spouse tho.

Anonymous,  December 8, 2008 at 3:38 PM  

Alone in the life
He meets many other souls
Who comes to be
Unfit for the lonely soul
lovely

Anonymous,  July 21, 2009 at 2:37 AM  

Loneliness is Pain,
But more its a reason
to risk,
to live
to love....

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