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Wednesday, November 19, 2008

Lonely

Lonely are the nights
Lonely are the days
Lonely am I,
in so many ways
Lonely are the seasons
Lonely are the years
So lonely am I,
that it brings tears.
Lonely is this place
Lonely is my life
So Lonely am I,
that I reach for a knife
Lonely is this court room
Lonely is my sentence
So lonely am I
that I ask for repentance.

20 comments:

Dr.Nishi Chauhan November 18, 2008 at 11:05 PM  

poem is simple n very nice BUT y u feel so lonely,its like punsihing urself...come out n njoy dis beautiful world...dont cry 4 those who dont even think of u

Er. Nidhi Mishra November 18, 2008 at 11:09 PM  

good one but at the same time i agree with Nishi...dont sound so depressed....cheer up

Er. Puja Kapoor November 18, 2008 at 11:11 PM  

this is not the Avinash we all know

Er. Snigddha Aggarwal November 18, 2008 at 11:15 PM  

Lonely are the seasons
Lonely are the years
So lonely am I,
that it brings tears
hmmm cancerians r always emotional
nice poem

Anonymous,  November 18, 2008 at 11:17 PM  

good one sir, nicely written
Regards
Sneha
IIT Kanpur(Hope u remember me)

Anonymous,  November 18, 2008 at 11:18 PM  

good one sir, very touching these lines:-
So lonely am I,
that it brings tears
Regards
Ashok
Kota

Anonymous,  November 18, 2008 at 11:19 PM  

good one, simple but very touching,reflects ur loneliness
Regards

Anonymous,  November 18, 2008 at 11:22 PM  

nice collection of poem on ur blog specially hindi...all segments r good(like economy & politics most)
nice team work
Rahul
Lucknow

Dr. Neha Srivastav November 19, 2008 at 2:07 AM  

good one avinash,like it
Regards

Anonymous,  November 19, 2008 at 2:08 AM  

Lonely are the seasons
Lonely are the years
So lonely am I,
that it brings tears.
reflects the lonesome world n u
Regards

Anonymous,  November 19, 2008 at 2:09 AM  

Good one sir

Anonymous,  November 19, 2008 at 5:16 AM  

Nice blog and contents....
Regards

Anonymous,  November 19, 2008 at 5:17 AM  

very intresting blog wid lots of informative, intrsting N in depth analysis....
Regards

Tripti November 19, 2008 at 7:03 AM  

Decide to be Happy
It’s your right
Seek what brings you pleasure
Be peaceful
Do not fight


Decide to be Grateful
It’s the way
Give and you shall receive
Say thank you
Every day

Anonymous,  November 19, 2008 at 7:07 AM  

beautiful poetry sir
Reagrds
Nitin

seema gupta November 19, 2008 at 9:00 AM  

"hi Avinash, you have expressed your thoughts and feelings in a very nice and touching way.... and i too agree with all of your freinds that come on cheer up dnt give space to lonelyness in your life...."

seema

now as a poet wanna write few words

"तन्हाई से दूर नही अब रह सकता,

मेरी सांसों मे, इन आहों मे,
मेरी रातों मे, हर बातों मे,
मेरी आखों मे, इन ख्वाबों मे,
कुछ अपनों मे, कुछ सपनो मे ,

मुझे अपनी सी लगती क्यों है तन्हाई ????

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